Someone pls help me . I will mark someone brainliest

Ihave to find 4 errors in each day of the week diary post. friday today was the last day of the school week so i are happy! mum made pizza to dinner. i really like mums pizzas. we watched a dvd after dinner. it was quite funny but my brother fall asleep on the sofa and didn’t see the end of the movie!

Plz i need answer 50pts3.02 outlinecharacters(who will the characters be? kate and mr. jacks should probably return. but are there new characters that you’ll introduce? are they inspired by characters you’ve read about in the past or people in your real life? ): setting(the story should probably start on the edge of the forcefield, but where else should kate go on her journey? ): conflict(kate solved one problem by escaping the forcefield. what's the new problem she’ll have to overcome? ): rising action 1(how does the new problem become worse? ): rising action 2(how does the new problem still get even worse? ): climax(what will be the most exciting part of this continuation of “grounded”? how does the new problem begin to turn around? ): resolution(how is the new problem solved? ): reflection (possible theme or lesson the character, and readers, learn? try to be inspired to write about a theme you’ve encountered in your past experiences with literature or even life.):

How has victor changed by the end of frankenstein