Please help, due tomorrow correct the errors

Below is the corrected sentence:

John had never heard  any speech that had so deep an effect on him as the one his coach delivered last night.

Explanation:

The given sentence has been corrected.

Words like "no" was removed, "effected" was changed to "an effect" and "as deeply" was changed to "so deep".

This sentence construction was made to give it a better, sensible and accurate meaning when read.

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long  

fiction/fantasy

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