Read the following statements carefully. In the space provided, explain if each is a good thesis statement or what can be done to improve it. A. Women made a great impact during World War II. B. The banning of performance enhancing drugs in baseball has decreased the number of home runs hit each year.

the addition that would strengthen melissa’s thesis statement, both the dark game and the code book explain the importance of codebreaking, is :

main ideas of each book

melissa should discuss the main ideas of each book because these ideas will fully support her thesis statement. through these details, readers will also understand the importance of codebreaking that melissa referred to, which was inspired by the books.

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the answer is c. it calls attention to the urgency of the message

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