Which of these is an inappropriate shift in verb tense? Our company is reaching people around the world with new
technologies. We are bringing wireless Internet access to people in
rural areas. Personally, I am trying to develop solar power
for electronic devices. It's amazing what we have done to
A. are bringing
B. is reaching
C. am trying
D. have done

hi,   i believe the outlines that were supposed to be showing at the sentences, are not. could you highlight them somehow?

i cannot see any of the options

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.