Jourdan's goal this summer is to learn to play three songs on the guitar. He has a summer job at a restaurant four days a week. This week, on his day off, he goes to the lake with his best friend. Before work, he reads his favoritewith
comic books and makes breakfast. After work, he helps his father cook dinner and plays basketball his sister.
Which of the following did Jourdan forget to do when making his schedule this week?
A
He didn't consider his personal goal and what he could do to work toward it.
B
He didn't do any tasks that he wanted to do. He only did things he had to do.
с
He didn't consider tasks that had a set time that couldn't be changed.
D
He didn't consider tasks that might take longer than expected.

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faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

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hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.