Write a body paragraph for an explanatory essay that supports the claim and uses academic writing throughout.
Your assignment should include the following elements:
• Evidence from 'The Chrysanthemums to support the claim you were given
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An objective tone, free of obvious opinions and bias, and a formal style
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Effective use of language, such as parallel structure, varied phrases and clauses,
and efficient adjustment of parts of speech
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Tips for SUCCESS
Ask yourself these questions as you revise
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Did I support the claim provided in the introduction paragraph?
Is my evidence specific and relevant to the points i'm making?
. Does my writing stay objective and formal in style?
• Doluse correct parallel structure and a variety of clauses and phrases?
. Is my writing direct and efficient?

after the signature of the treaty of versailles in june 1919, germany lost nearly 25,000 square miles and a population of 7 million people. these territories included eupen-malmedy area and moresnet which were ceded to belgium. regarding relations with france, germany ceded the sovereignty of the saar coal mines to this country, as well as the provinces of alsace-lorraine.

explanation:

in a place once known as north america, now known as panem, is a very rich city surrounded by twelve districts. every year because this very rich city, known as the capitol, is so rich and likes to think they control all the districts - which they do - there is something known as the hunger games! this is where two children, one boy and one girl from each district from the ages of twelve to eighteen, have to leave their families and compete in the hunger games, a live event that is aired on tv's all over panem. when katniss everdeen, aged sixteen from district 12, has to volunteer to take the place of her twelve-year-old sister prim after prim's name is called forth to become the 23rd member to compete in the 74th hunger games, she promises to prim that she will win! katniss doesn't believe she's coming out alive - but she's not going down without a fight.

because district 12 is so poor, katniss has been close to death many times from starvation but she's made it through it. but this is a different kind of close to death; this katniss doesn't know if she can survive.

she doesn't want to hurt, or kill anyone but when it comes down to it katniss' instinct is to survive. but when she starts to have confusing feelings about the boy from her district who is also her fellow contender, things get worse, and then she teams up with the girl from district 11 and only one person can survive. but who will it be? will her feelings get the better of her? will she let someone else win so they don't have to die? if katniss is going to win she's going to have to be brutal. she's going to have to kill!

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