Narrowing Thesis Statements Each thesis statement is too broad. Make each one more specific
1. Learning a new language is not easy. Mastering the pronunciation of a new
language can be challenging for several reasons.
2. My family has some interesting people.
3. School requires hard work.
4. The Internet is useful.
5. A college education is important
6. I write best under the right conditions.

The rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago.which choice combines these two sentences from paragraph two to achieve a coherent flow of ideas? a) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden" and permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. b) permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago and the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden." c) the rich natural resources made the sacramento valley a "garden of eden; " and so the permanent villages were established about 8,000 years ago. d) because of the rich natural resources which made the sacramento valley a ‘garden of eden,’ native americans established permanent villages there 8,000 years ago.