Advantages and disadvantages of distance learning ESSAY EVALUATION CHECKLIST
1. The topic sentence states the topic and the controlling ideal
2. The paragraph indudes 23 main supporting ideas O
3. The main supporting ideas are developed by providing specific details|
4. There are no off topic ideas that break the unity of the paragraph
5. Transitional words and phrases link ideas in the paragraph 0
6. The paragraph uses a dear method of organization O
1. The conduding sentence follows logically from the points made in the
Distance learning has become one of the solutions
to global pandemic and it has its own advantages
like convenient learning from home and
disadvantages like missing opportunity to meet
and socialize with new people. First of all,
distance learning is very convenient. Students can
learn and listen to lectures straight from their
homes or dormitory. Moreover, students are not
distracted by other people and they can mainly
focus on learning material. Finally, distance
learning is great for
people with social anxiety
who can be safely at their homes listening to the
lectures. However, distance learning has its own
disadvantages like lost
socialize with new people. It eliminates whole
t opportunity to meet and
university experience where you could talk to
like-minded people, socialize, go to parties and
just have some fun. To sum up, distance learning
is perfect for convenience, however you miss the
chance to meet new people.
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8. There is no informal colloquial language in the paragraph O
9. The paragraph is revised for glammar o
10. The paragraph is revised for spelling 0
11. The paragraph is revised for punctuation