Consider the lesson that the play thus far teaches about political power and the attempts to achieve it through violent means. What do the events in Macbeth, Acts I–III, suggest is the outcome of such efforts? Address this question in an essay that cites examples from the play to support general statements about it. Before writing, you might organize your ideas on the diagram below.

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."

in what passage i'm sorry but i don't see anything there.

you are perfect just the way you are

so are you asking to write a page on why its so wrong?