Read the first sentences in Dorthea’s personal narrative. 1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them.

What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative?

Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative.
The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.”
In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.
The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3

The answer is most likely C.

Explanation:

All of the other answers don't seem to help except for C.

A doesn't seem to change much if she puts herself in a 3rd person.

B is wrong by just using common sense.

and D wouldn't seem to help either.

(hope that helps. ^^)

The answer will be c

Explanation:

i took the test on edgenuity

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?