Make this sentence more descriptive. The German shepherd growled angrily at Kendrick when he jumped over the fence to retrieve his ball.

The German shepherd growled at Kendrick when jumping the fence to retrieve his ball.

Growling angrily, the massive German shepherd startled Kendrick who was quickly jumping over the white picket fence to retrieve his worn baseball.  

Explanation:

The first  version is confusing.  A reader may not understand if Kendrick or the dog is jumping over the fence with the use of "he".  By clarifying this and including more active, descriptive words, we can create a better sentence.

which of the following was specifically permitted by the emancipation proclamation?

free african americans were allowed to fight for the confederacy.

free african americans were allowed to enlist in the union army and navy.

enslaved people in border states were allowed to move to the north.

enslaved people in border states were allowed to become confederate citizens.

kenny´s more than 25 years of relevant public service. in the army for two decades, as official representative for four years, and now for the department of state, as ambassador. this career clearly demonstrates great capacities in the public sector.