Please help me! I have limited time! I will give BRAINLIEST!!! Question:
Rewrite the same sentence in your own style and and describe ways in which your revision improved the sentence or made it less effective.

Sentence:
And he ketches Dan’l by the nap of the neck, and lifted him up and says “Why, blame my cats, if he don’t weigh five pound!” And turned him upside down, and he belched out a double handful of shot.

Please I would appreciate anyone’s help bcz I’m rly struggling! Thank you :)