Change this sentence to correctly include a restrictive phrase. Everyone crowded around the ball player, the pitcher, who hit the winning run. Everyone crowded around the ball player who hit the winning run. Everyone crowded around the pitcher because he hit the winning run. Because he hit the winning run, everyone crowded around the pitcher. Everyone crowded around the pitcher, the ball player who hit the winning run.

The Mentioned sentences included restrictive phrases as mention :

Explanation

The relative clause is same as restrictive clause which bring our the important information about the nouns, also known as relative clause and the relative clauses not set by the commas.

The sentence looses his meaning when we separated the clauses from the words :-

and the remaining sentence could be refer to ball player .

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The sentence that correctly includes a restrictive phrase is:

A. Everyone crowded around the ball player who hit the winning run.

Explanation:

A restrictive clause is a relative clause that provides essential information about a noun or noun phrase, limiting it. It can also be called defining relative clause. A restrictive clause is not set off by commas. The option that has information about the ball player that is not set off by commas is:

A. Everyone crowded around the ball player who hit the winning run.

When we have a restrictive clause removed, the sentence loses part of its meaning. If we remove "who hit the winning run," the rest of the sentence could be referring to any ball player. Therefore, this information is crucial because it specifies to which ball player we refer.

Note: Option B does not have commas as well, but it uses the conjunction "because", which does not form a restrictive clause.

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1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)