WRITE AN ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY It is sometimes argued that too many students go to university, while others claim that a university education should be a universal right. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion. Word limit 120-150 words

In developed countries, the number of students, who had graduated from the universities, is increasing every year. Critics, on the other hand, claim that many university courses are worthless and young people would be better off with gaining skills in the workforce. In this essay, I will examine the both sides of the arguments and try to reach a reasonable conclusion. Many of funds, which are available at the society, are provided by the government. Likewise, most of school loans, are supported by the government. The school loans would burdened on students after graduating from their universities, until they got paid back. This increase in amount on student’s loan put up the weight on to the government’s shoulder as a whole. As the society has changed rapidly with the technology advancement, there are a various positions with no requirement for the university degree. However, many of young people prefer to obtain a tertiary degree immediately after their high school graduations.

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