Rewrite the sentences below to make them more concise. I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator, Dr. Lomas, towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items drafted for her signature or approval, as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies. Please encourage your section to keep their sentences short.

Explanation:

I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator. Dr. Lomas has drafted for her signature or approval towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items. She also did it as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies.

This is the direct tone that is more concise than the long sentence from your answer. There are three shorter sentences that are considering independent clause.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

i think its,

b) the narrator's mental state is anguished.

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