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THE PROBLEM WITH WASTED ENERGY
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To begin with the problem is that energy is wasted throughout the entire world by leaving lights on while not using them, is a common one. Another example is like the damps. Moreover many of the damps here where I live are not even in use, that is waste of energy because they could make energy throughout the damps…but they do not use this method.

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This problem is, unfortunately like I said before, people waste energy unnecessarily for example: in the houses they leave lights on, air conditioning too low, and/or heaters on without even using them. Another waste of energy are the dams. The dams can be extremely useful and resourceful but people in charge like the government and the water facilities decide not to use them.

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Finally, this problem can be solved/sorted out/settled by people and government in many ways. One of them is in every house independently make a “habit” of turning off lights ext. and the government and water facilities can start using the dams and start using stuff to make energy economically. Like using water, using solar power, and even using the wind.