Anybody think this is good this is a english essay that I wrote based off an idea from somebody here: It was a dark and stormy night: I was driving home to my wife, It was rainy and cold, my radio turned to static and the night dark and the night contained. I looked at my left nothing but woods for miles, looked to my right, nothing. I passed a stop sign, I looked down for a second, only a second because my eyes were getting tired, I looked back up and BAM! I swerved left then right, then I slammed on the brakes and I screeched to a halt. My eyes went big and my heart pounded a thousand beats per minute. I unbucked with shaky hands and unlocked my front door and got out onto the cold, wet rain. I ran in front of my car, hands up with my yellow jacket trying to cover as much of the rain I could. It was hard to tell in the dark what or who I hit. I ran back into my car and tried to find my phone. I pushed papers and papers out of the way, I found a blanket my son probably left, my suitcase, my lunch case, no phone. I searched swiftly, pulling things out of the way, stuffing all of my belongings in the back, I finally found my phone. I swung back and forth and my phone light lit up I ran back and saw a body, I ran to him, no her, and checked for her pulse, still there. I took a breath and with a sigh of relief, I put my phone on the ground and shook her shoulders. I slapped her lightly across the face, I saw her eyes flicker and I heard her groan lightly, the wind caught her groan and picked it up like it was never said. “Stay with me!” I said. I was not letting her die. I picked her up and opened the car door I set her in gently and I could hear her groan with pain, again. I shut the car door, and quickly ran to my side of the car door, got in and started the car, the engine did not want to start, I tried again, and again. Finally the car engine started and I quickly left towards the closest hospital I could find.

up to you to decide what happens if he makes it, or if she dies.