GUYS WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THIS STORY, I JUST MADE ITS DUE TOMMORW WHAT GRADE WOULD YOU GIVE ME. doesn't let me post the whole story,, so the rest of the story will be in the comment section.

Wish I Was Sitting
Cracks and creaks all throughout the 4 story house that 17 people live in, Inside of the big house a beautiful young lady cleaning and cooking and other not so good, laying on her bed. Dingdong rang the doorbell. Who is that yelled the lady napping, It’s your kids said her teenager that skipped school that day? Shalosh is a cruel person although she has 10 kids she shows no mercy. “It’s your husband,'' replied the wife of her son. Shalosh sprang up from the bed, snatched the broom from Sabrina, and began to sweep the shining floors, What are you looking at? “Go open the door”! said Shaloosh yelled. At this point it was silence. Shalosh was looking disgustingly… Sabrina opened the door without thinking much of it.

“Oh I've been busy all day cleaning and cooking for shalook and he doesn’t even notice me.”
“Come down lady I just got home, Had to defend the soldier in new york who killed his boss”
“Do you see what I did seriously? All this food and shining windows and clean kids, It’s all me, my legs are killing me. I just wish I could sit while eating and two angels sitting next to me provide me with what I want.”
“Your legs are fine, it's Sabrina’s legs that are in need of assistance…”
“And she doesn’t do anything,” they said at the same time They both laughed crazily but that didn’t seem to bother Sabrina. She smirked just to show the couple that she doesn’t care.

Sabrina went to the 2nd floor of the shared house, Where she and her 3 kids and husband stayed.
quarter past 4 and kids came stomping up the stairs
“maa i got a certificate today from the science foundation”
“ I got a trophy,” the other said
“ I got chocolates and a dollar from my teacher, she told me whoever makes the best origami wins chocolates and a dollar and i won they all laughed but i didn’t take the dollar”
“Why not,” said the proud mother
“Because papa Duba always told us never to take money from strangers, would you mind if i have taken it?”
“No, you should have taken it she was your teacher and you won something”
“It doesn't matter maa, but where paps,” The oldest boy said with a worried look on his face, The mother didn’t know what to say, she hurried to set the table so they could eat, the kids did their homework, got cleaned, ate, and went to sleep. Really good kids are so blessed and beautiful it's a shame to see them living in such conditions.