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(1) People who forgive are happier than those who
seek revenge. (2) For example, my cousin always tries
to even the score when he believes that he has been
wronged, and he is one of the unhappiest people I
have ever known. (3) Conversely, one of my teammates
never holds a grudge, and she is one of the happiest
people I know. (4) Clearly, holding on to the anger
that drives revenge makes a person miserable, while
letting that
anger go brings piece.
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Cite textual evidence to support this analysis of the connection. a. he says that he chooses “to believe that there are insufficient funds in the great vaults of opportunity of this nation,” so it shows that he has given up hope. b. he states, “so we’ve come to cash this check, a check that will give us upon demand the riches” of the nation for everyone. this proves that he wants government money to be equally shared. c. mlk explains that america should give african americans “a bad check, a check that has come back marked ‘insufficient funds.’” d. he mentions that america wrote a bad check for freedom to african americans, but he states that he “refuses to believe that the bank of justice is bankrupt.” he also states, “we’ve come to cash this check… of freedom and security of justice.”