Which two ways would the passage be different if it were told from the point of view of a third person in chapter 1 in autobiography of Buffalo bill

Asap that time of year thou mayst in me behold when yellow leaves, or none, or few do hang upon those boughs which shake against the cold, bare ruined choirs, where late the sweet birds sang. in this excerpt, what is the best meaning for the word "late"? not on time until recently dead well into the evening

The balance includes both the fees for service and the shipping charges. is this sentence incomplete or complete?

Which two lines in this excerpt from elizabeth bishops the fish suggests that the speaker respects the fish