I believe that honesty was the best policy, so when I saw the kids putting candy in their bag that belongs to Mr. Jones, I knew I had to say something. Mr. Jones’ trustworthy nature and gullibility makes him an easy target for things like this. I went to his
classroom and told him that two
students had broken into his
desk. Now, Neil and
Brandon is spending the
lunch hour in the detention
hall for the rest of the week.

Is there anything wrong with this?