I need help again to improve my pronunciation.

Which do I choose and where?

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Explanation:

The sentence given is:

Jin didn't return my text about hanging out this weekend thus I can only assume that he's really busy.

First, notice how there's a little unevenness between "weekend" and "thus". That's because there is no conjunction or anything to bridge them together. That means that they are two separate sentences.

A period will separate the sentences. A semicolon separates two similar sentences. This means that the bridged sentences must both be about a general topic. Such as:

My dog's name is Daisy; she is the most lovable dog!

Because these two sentences are similar, you can choose whether to use a semicolon or period.

After doing that, keep in mind that after every transition—first, furthermore, however, to conclude, additionally, etc.—there must be a comma. This is extremely important.

Thus is a transition, which means it requires a comma after it.

So now your sentence should look like this:

Jin didn't return my text about hanging out this weekend; thus, I can only assume that he's really busy.

or

Jin didn't return my text about hanging out this weekend. Thus, I can only assume that he's really busy.

There is nothing else to correct, so your final product should be one of the above.

the narrator is saying that the old lady made her feel uncomfortable. you know this because they say "i found that rather irksome", "perhaps it was her being so upright and trim", and "i don't think it was that, because i thought that quaintly pleasant." hope this !

(you didn't attach a copy of the poem, but i'm answering as best as i can)

since a simile compares two unlike things using like or as, it kind of gives an item the ability to do something it can't.

example: "the player was like a tiger on the field"

in this sentence, the simile conveys the idea that the player was fast and strong, like a tiger.