Whats ur Favorite cheesecake Lemme know

New York style Cheesecake

I love how creamy and dreamy they taste!

Cherry Cheesecake

What it is: The Original Cheesecake topped with cherry preserves

The verdict: I’m bummed to rank Cherry Cheesecake this low, as it seems like all the right pieces are there. I love cherry pie, and I really like the Original Cheesecake. So you’d think the Original Cheesecake topped with cherry pie filling would be a hit, right? Wrong. The filling wasn’t holding up its end of the bargain. Swing and a miss.

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2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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