Is this a good store to send into your teacher Long ago there was a white polar bear. This polar bear was born white as snow. The father was a black bear and the mother was a white polar bear. This was the first panda in the whole world. They named him Jeff Curry. Then the parents sent him to panda school to learn how to read, write, and eat bamboo. During lunch a whole bunch of white rude bears made fun of him because he was black and white.
“Haha you're black and white! You have a different skin color!” The white bears teased.
“Leave me alone! Or I’ll call the po-po,” said Jeff confidently.
When Jeff went home he called the po-po.
“How may I help you?” The bear PO PO said.
“People keep making fun of me at school because I’m black and white!” Jeff said sobbing.
“I would make fun of you because your black and white too!” The po po said laughing.
“Pshhh, Hang up I’m coming right now.” The po po said laughing.
Then the po po showed up outside Jeff’s house two seconds later. He drove so fast that lightning couldn’t even struck. He kicked down Jeff’s door.
“Now show me where the bad people are.” The po po said.
Then Jeff showed him where the bullies were.
“You snitch!” One of the white bears said.
“You crack head why’d you do that?” Another one said.
“Why are you talking like that I can write a note for you to go to jail!” The po po said as he slapped one of the white bears chest.
Then the small white bear fell on the ground and he started to panic. It cut chest and it busted and all the blood came out and he had to go to the ER. The white bear got stitches and he didn’t go to school for a couple of days. The next day the Polar bears and Jeff went to school. They went to health class and they learned about girls. Then they all went home to make another panda so Jeff wouldn't be so lonely. A few years later Jeff had about a million of his kind. Now their were a million panda’s in the world! That is how panda’s go their color.

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  a basketball team comprises of five players as mentioned above. the five players include point guard, shooting guard, small forward, power forward and center (ramen 56). the rules do not limit players to certain locations. however, evolution of basketball from the 1980s made players assume certain locations and roles. the point guard should be the fastest team member, and is responsible for organizing the attacks of the team. he does this by making sure that the right player has the ball at the right time (wissel 87). the shooting guard creates mainly long-range shorts and watches the opponent's last player on the defense. the small forward member of the team is majorly responsible for scoring points through dribble penetration and cuts to the basket. he also rebounds and plays actively. power forward plays invasively having their back to the basket and when on defense he plays under the basket or against the opponent's power forward (ramen 54). the center often uses his size and height to score and safeguard the basket when on defense. however, there is no rule that limits the players to these descriptions.  

              there are four quarters in regular basketball game, and each takes 10 or 12 minutes (ramen 67). in college basketball games, the game uses two-twenty minute halves. extra time should take 5 minutes in all games except in high school, where it takes four minutes. teams need to change sides after the first half of the game. a typical basketball game might take approximately 2 hours excluding the time when the game is inactive. at any given time, the court should have ten players, 5 from both sides. despite substitutions being unrestricted, it can only be performed when the game is stopped (wissel 51). additionally, teams must have a uniform comprising of a jersey and a pair of shorts. for identification purposes, the jersey should have a unique number in the team printed at the front and back. in some instances, the jerseys have the names of players, sponsors and team printed on them.  

              in conclusion, regulation basketball hoop comprises of a rim or basket attached to a backboard. violating the rules of the game results in a change of the shot clock if the committed by the defense or loss of ball possession. basketball teams comprise of five players, which includes the point guard, shooting guard, power forward, small forward and center. a typical basketball game might take approximately 2 hours excluding the time when the game is inactive.