Prewriting i need help. You and nine peers have been selected to apply for an important college scholarship. Only one student will be awarded the scholarship. You have been asked to write a brief essay to the scholarship committee in which you share an important event in your life that significantly changed you, your view about life, your life goals, or your character for the better. Apply narrative techniques, a solid prewriting strategy, and creative sentence patterns to share your story and stand apart from other applicants.

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answer- First, the event that changed my life was myself. I did not known what doors will open to me until I learned more about who I was. Also, I'm not talking about my name I known it is Aniyah but learning about my capability in life and what I'm here to do. I learned lots of  things about myself like I'm an artist, and smart, and cute. But, do these things really matter like appearance or how rich you are or poor , if you are famous. The answer to that is no. The most important thing I've learned about myself is not matter were I go or no matter who I meet I can always make someone my friend.  To me that is like a power. Also, one more important thing is when I'm around my friends and family it makes me feel that my life is worth living for. To my family and to my friends, also, to my friends online they known who they are. Last, I just won't to thank you for being in my life.   Explanation: also  please do not report. i mean you shouldn't but people will. but do not ok.

she is creating a metaphor to convey the idea that love is hard won. i took the quiz and got a 100% : )

b) the sentance would correctly look more like this: jerry's team manned the winning boat with a broken rudder.