Students in Patrice's English class publish an online journal of their reading Students, parents, and teachers visit the site. Here's the beginning of Patrices latest entry
(1) Recently, I read "Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea" (2) At first I didn't expect to enjoy it. (3) After all, it's over a century
old (4) But, dude, I couldn't have been more wrong! (5) The plot combines scinece fiction, travelogue, and political thriller (6) Here's a brief
summary
What revisions and edits should Patrice make for his purpose and audience?

Read this excerpt from the exposition in "the monkey's paw." father and son were at chess, the former, who possessed ideas about the game involving radical changes, putting his king into such sharp and unnecessary perils that it even provoked comment from the white-haired old lady knitting placidly by the fire. what is one piece of information you can infer about the story from this sentence? a. the father in the story is possessed, so he probably says insane things a lot. b. the woman in the story is knitting, so the characters probably don't have good clothes to wear. c. the father is playing chess with the son, but the son is not old enough to know the rules. d. since the father likes taking risks in a game, he might like taking risks in life as well.

Which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions?

During the industrial age, what was one important way businesses told consumers about new products? through phonographs through telephones through telegraphs through catalogues