Can you edit this to make it better?? John Muir here uses metaphors to show his love for the environment and how he felt the during his journey in such a beautiful place. “The flower was white and made the impression of the upmost simple purity like a sunflower.” In this sentence form the essay showing how nature is a free place by comparing the freedom to a sunflower. “With one of these large backwoods loaves I was able to wonder many long wild fertile miles in the forests and bogs, free as the winds, gathering plants, and glorying in gods abounding inexhaustible spiritual beauty bread”. Here as well they are showing the freedom in nature.

John Muir was this country's most famous and authoritative naturalist. John grew up in Dunbar, Scotland and he was a writer, lecturer, geologist, botanist and an explorer. Muir loved using many metaphors to show his love for the ecosystem and how he felt during his many journeys in a such a beautiful place. If it weren't for him and his writings, we would most likely not have Yosemite National Park as we know it today. John Muir was also involved in the creation of the Grand Canyon, Kings Canyon, Petrified Forest and Mt. Rainier National Parks. But he did some writings about Alaska and they led to further conceptions of the landscapes over time. One of the metaphors John uses is, “The flower was white and made the impression of the upmost simple purity like a sunflower.” Which this is allowing the reader to create a gorgeous image of the flower in their head. Another literary element Muir uses beautifully is imagery. He writes, “With one of these large backwoods loaves I was able to wonder many long wild fertile miles in the forests and bogs, free as the winds, gathering plants, and glorying in gods abounding inexhaustible spiritual beauty bread”. Which he means the woods were "welcomed as friends." He considered nature as his friends and feels to be one with nature in a way. Wind, plants, storms and woods, everything was perceived by Muir as loving friends cohabiting the beautiful world.

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