Can someone turn this into a better paragraph I have all the info I just don't know where to start xD Miss Emily is a very lonely and desperate person. She is lonely because her father rejected any suitor that knocked on her door. Miss Emily is so desperate and lonely she bought arsenic to kill homer. Miss Emily dies; then people find homer's body in the upstairs bedroom. Miss Emily was a very lonely person. This leads her to commit murder.

Miss Emily is a very lonely and desperate person. She is feeling isolated because her father rejected any suitor that knocked on her door. Miss Emily is so desperate and lonesome she bought arsenic to kill homer. Miss Emily dies; later people found homer's body in the upstairs bedroom. Miss Emily was a very solitary person. This led her to committing murder.

(Just try to change repetitive words with synonyms. It will always be a huge plus for your paragraph but I hope this helps.)