Which passage violates all of the rules of concise and precise writing? A. The barely moving train seemed, in my humble and lowly opinion,
as I am not a train expert, to be having some seriously disturbing
trouble with the process of track changing, and the whole train
also needed a really good washing and professionally done paint
job.
B. That train was creeping along the track as it tried to change tracks
successfully
C. The moving train seemed to be having some trouble changing
tracks, and it needed a good paint job.
D. None of the above are correct.

i think its c

independent

when alex falls for the charming new boy at school, cole -- a handsome, funny, sports star who adores her - she can't believe she's finally found her soul who truly loves and understands her.  

at first, alex is blissfully happy. sure, cole seems a little jealous of her relationship with her close friend zack, but what guy would want his girlfriend spending all her time with another boy? as the months pass, though, alex can no longer ignore cole's small put-downs, pinches, or increasingly violent threats.  

as alex struggles to come to terms with the sweet boyfriend she fell in love with and the boyfriend whose "love" she no longer recognizes, she is forced to choose -- between her "true love" and herself.

explanation:

c. with one finger is the answer

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