Is my paragraph response good? I have to write a paragraph response (summary) on the file I uploaded. My paragraph is ... Immigrants moved to America because they did not like the ways things elevated back in their hometown. They came to America for two great hopes: the hope for personal freedom and the hope for economic opportunities. Ever since immigrants had migrated to the United States of America, an effect of having so many of them come to America people have been demanding more political liberty and an increase in the number of goods and services.