Read the sentence. The hot chocolate was a nice treat today. Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

✔️The steaming mug of rich hot chocolate was a soothing treat on this snowy day.

Explanation:

The above option is the best sentence that is descriptive and utilises sensory words.

This sentence gives the details and still maintains the message of the first sentence. Sensory words are actually words that help to describe how we experience things around us. They give us information on things that we see, touch, feel, hear, etc. The sensory words are: "rich, hot, soothing, steaming"

the guest is my guess

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.