Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout. Passage Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater, and creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students provide feedback on their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that peer review is a valuable teaching tool that not only helps student artists reimagine their work but also pushes student critics to develop their taste and technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong with this is that sometimes people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be nice. When that happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peer-review process can become unproductive.

Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater, and creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students provide feedback on their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that peer review is a valuable teaching tool that not only helps student artists reimagine their work but also pushes student critics to develop their taste and technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong with this is that sometimes people give really ineffective feedback and don't get how to be gentle. When that happens, feelings get hurt, and the peer-review process can become unproductive.

based on the biblical principle philippians 4: 13 "i can do everything through christ who strengthens me." i agree that it is through him that we are given the strength to cope with every situation.

and based on the biblical principle proverbs 16: 32 "better to get angry slowly than to be a hero. better to be even-tempered than to capture a city."   i agree with the author of the passage to the extent that the nobility of heart demonstrates the strength of a person. those who are contemptuous, get angry easily and show their anger toward others are really weak, but those who are noble and make sure to not hurt other people and their feelings are strong people.

it is believed to be alfred, lord himself