In a strong paragraph, explain the theme of the poem “Still Here”. Support that theme with a discussion and textual evidence. As you quote poetry, make sure you include line numbers like this: …. “My hopes the wind done scatter” (2). Your topic sentence will be the thematic statement, your body will provide a discussion of the textual evidence (don’t just list it, but discuss it), and the concluding sentence will restate the theme. Still Here:
I have been scared and battered
My hopes the wind done scattered
Snow has friz’ me,
Sun has baked me,
Looks like between ‘em they done
Tried to make me
Stop laughin,
Stop lovin’,
Stop livin’ –
But I don’t care!
I’m still here!

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

from the excerpt from the "the dark game" the reader can infer that folke cronholm was spying for the allied nations.