Li-Young is writing a suspense story for a local summer camp's evening fireside program. This is his first paragraph.
The old house next door had been empty for years. Ginny
couldn't remember a time when anyone had lived there.
Then, one night, she heard noises coming from the house.
When she glanced out her window, she thought she saw
something move in one of the upstairs rooms. She decided
to investigate and went to wake up her brother.
How should Li-Young revise this paragraph to elaborate on
specific ideas in the text?

‘low in fat but high in deliciousness, by munching on a savage wild boar you aren’t depriving poor little peppa and george of a long-lost cousin, but rather reaffirming your rightful and god-given position at the top of the food chain.’ the above extract features which four kinds of bias? innuendo/opinion of fact/biased tone/mistreatment of opposing views/ subjective sourse/ subjective vocabulary/ exaggeration/ 0subjective statistics

If i have enough money, buy a car. a, will b, shall

20 points plus brainlest answer if right.joe nesbo, a travelling salesman, was staying at a hotel for business. he was having a dinner meeting that night, so he decided to take a nap in the middle of the afternoon. he was awakened by a knock at the door, and then a man walked in. “oh my, i’m terribly sorry, this isn’t my room. , pardon the intrusion.” the man calmly backed out and left. nesbo got up and locked the door – something he forgot to do before his nap – and lay back down on the bed. but then he shot up in bed and called the lobby to tell them there was a burglar on the prowl. what made nesbo think that?