I would appreciate it if someone worded this essay differently for me <3

p1s3: In my opinion, mobile devices are helpful for everyone because we can use them as a resource.

p2s1: First of all, people who are very anti-social in person tend to be more outgoing on screen.

p2s4: For example, when someone is shy, social media can help them feel more connected to others, because they feel more comfortable expressing themselves.

p3 last 2 sentences: For instance, there are times when someone wants the definition of a word they don't know, so they look online. In sum, mobile devices are not only used for entertainment, but as a resource for many kids around the world.

p4s1: Finally, mobile phones help people stay connected.

p4s3: In addition, social media can be used to keep relationships alive by staying connected through calls and texts.

p4s5: In a nutshell, social engagements are a very important part of relationships.

p5: In the end, many people...

I might add some later

i guess you are missing the idea that has to be supported, am i right?

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