Write a four paragraph essay about a time or day where you felt everything just seemed to fall apart. Be sure you use specific details and proofread your work. Along with this essay you must include pre-writing, your pre- writing can be a bubble map, venn- diagram, or listing or jotting ideas. You can do the pre-writing on the same document as your essay. Use your time wisely, you will have 2 days to complete this writing assignment. Be sure that you have complete sentences and paragraphs, each paragraph should have 6-8 sentences for this assignment. Also, be sure that you use proper grammar and sentence structure when writing.

What is wrong with the sentence. the car is packed, we're already to go, and the weather is looking beautiful.

Langston hughes cited walt whitman as one of his greatest influences and some believe that hughes wrote "i, too, sing america" in response to whitman's "i hear america singing." using on whitman's poem. consider aspects such as structure, there, word, choice, etc., as you craft your response. your response will be scored on how well you: -demonstrate your understanding of the ideas of the text -use evidence from the text to develop and support your ideas -organize your response in a logical manner -demonstrate an appropriate writing style through the use of precise word choice and varied sentences -use standard conventions for writing

Millicent sat down at her desk in the big study hall. tomorrow she would come to school, proudly, laughingly, without lipstick, with her brown hair straight and shoulder length, and then everybody would know, even the boys would know, that she was one of the elect. teachers would smile , thinking perhaps: so now they've picked millicent arnold. i never would have guessed it. —"initiation," sylvia plath what inference can be made about millicent from the way she is characterized indirectly? millicent is a student with straight brown hair. millicent does not usually take care of her appearance. millicent has not always been popular.