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OKAY SO I WROTE THE THING BELOW I JUST NEED SOMEONE TO REVISE IT THE WAY MY TEACHER ASKS THANKS You have previously written the introduction to your article. Now you will write the body paragraphs to continue your cause and effect article.
Be sure to use the information you previously wrote in your Informational Research Chart and your introduction.
In at least three body paragraphs remember to include:
a subheading for each section of the body
transition phrases at the beginning of each paragraph
a topic sentence for each body paragraph
support for your topic sentence with evidence from your research, using signal phrases
five or more complete sentences in each paragraph
at least one graphic in your article
at least one link to a resource that supports your thesis
technical language to show your understanding of the topic
Use correct grammar, punctuation, spelling and write in formal style using the third person point of view.
Add your introduction to the body.
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HERES WHAT I WROTE YOU JUST GOTTA ADD THE STUFF IN IT PLEASE BUT MAKE IT MAKE SENCE
Have you ever wondered about how video games can affect someone positively and negatively?

In October 1958 Physicist William Higinbotham created what is presumed to be the first ever video game, he created this to show that science isn't just about war.
Video games have always been seen as good or bad- negative or positive there have been reasons to believe that they weren't the best thing to do in o\passing time while others proved that yes you shouldn't do it 24/7 there wasn't anything completely wrong with it.
As reference to the good and bad here are some examples. The `Study moose` found out that kids indeed were more likely to become obese and be more agrivated/ show moew agression towards everything.
While the `Fuller Youth Institute` proved that playing video games in fact did improve hand-eye coordination, problem solving, one's memory, and a person’s ability to focus for longer durations of time.
The `Aps Physics` did agree with how video games helped more than what some would say as they once said that Games could build a person’s solving skills. The way this works is that games would start with small problems and as the game progressed the problems got harder which has shown to help with kids reaction time and how good they can be at solving problems.
Although once again the `Study Moose` showed that people are more likely to become sleep deprived and even sometimes confuse reality and fiction with each other.
Games can be helpful as they can also be bad. There is nothing 100% good with a video game just as there is nothing 100% wrong with a video game.

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