Submit a response, in 5 - 7 sentences, that describes how the author's word choice creates a different tone in each poem. Use textual evidence from the recipes to support your answer.

rhyming octave and a rhyming sestet

if i'm wrong i'm sorry

jim mohr

explanation:

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.

i do not the question is put in the corrorect order