Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout. Passage
Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater,
and creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students
provide feedback on their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that
peer review is a valuable teaching tool that not only helps student artists
reimagine their work but also pushes student critics to develop their taste and
technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong with this is that sometimes
people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be nice. When that
happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peer-review process can become
unproductive

Did franklin achieve the virtues of humility?

Pl i ben trying and trying but i still cant get it. you are to write a five paragraph literary essay based on one of the 4 prompts and what you have read and learned in this module. these are your options: 1. how do the events of "the white umbrella" teach the narrator a lesson about shame and acceptance? 2. what role does creativity play in "the bat-poet"? 3. how does the character of squeaky change over the course of "raymond's run"? 4. discuss the influences of older family members on the protagonists and speakers in the stories and poems of this unit. you are to write a five paragraph literary essay based on what you have read and learned in this module. your final submission should meet the following requirements. • submit completed pre-writing and outline documents. • write an essay that contains an introduction with hook and thesis statement, supporting paragraphs with evidence and at least one quotation, and a conclusion that restates the thesis and reviews main points. • use transitions appropriate to the pattern of organization. • use vocabulary to create tone and voice. • cite primary source (quotation). • submit completed revision checklist. • vary sentence structure. • create sentences with parallel structures. • use technology in the writing process.

Urgently need to do with 1-20. you very much!