Which sentence from the paragraph has been revised correctly? Even though, my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards, with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, Max.

However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, Max.

D

Explanation:

You almost always have to put a comma after the word however for a better flow of reading. Having a comma after the word loyal makes the sentence feel un-natural to read. So that comma should be removed. The rest of the options just made the correct sentences grammatically incorrect, which is why D is the best option.