Your sister has gain admission into your formal school write a latter giving her information about the school and advise her on how to behave well while in the school

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                                                                       90 Aba Owerri Road,

                                                                       Umungasi,

                                                                        Aba.

                                                                        November 17, 2020.

Dear Christine,

      I felt so good when I heard that you gained admission into Walden High School. I know this to be a well deserved achievement considering your commitment to your studies. Walden High school is revered because the school has maintained a standard of moral and academic excellence over the past hundred years of its existence.

    My years as a student at Walden High School were quite worthwhile. I can boldly say that Walden High school is springboard that can launch dedicated students into a bright future.

   Christine, life is all about taking responsibility for yourself. You will no longer be pampered and aided in making decisions as often as the time when you were here with us at home. You must now begin to work on yourself to be strong and develop good character. You must learn how to make good decisions independently and do the right thing because of your conscience rather than to evade punishment. Always remember  the injunction of the Holy Bible; "Do not follow a multitude to do evil". Let this be your watchword.

    Lastly, focus is the ultimate key to excellence.  You must remain focused on your students and surround yourself with friends who have big dreams of a great future. Never mingle with people who lack vision and drive for excellence.

    A word is enough for the wise. Remember obey all corona virus safety protocols announced by the school management.

                                                                                             Yours Sincerely,

                                                                                             Jude

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

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