Highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. Despite negative media coverage, group organizations like fraternities
and sororities provide healthy, supportive social networks for members.

I'm pretty sure the highlighted phrase should be "like fraternities and sororities" because it adds unnecessary details, possibly leaving out ones which are more important.

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one time i was sleeping on a bench outside of walgreens and someone offered me money because they thought i was homeless

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go to the home screen and it says what do you need to know? then type the