One positive, essential quality of narrative writing that you need to
address with revision is

A. that you have distracting details about your
characters to purposefully confuse readers

B. that you have included enough description
about the setting to help readers see it for
themselves

C. that you have flat, uninteresting dialogue to
distance your readers from the story

different routes can lead to sammy to different places, with different roads.   if you check a map, you can see the routes.   try to make connections of the places and count how many there are.   hope this : )

b

explanation:

vey information about pap? physical description beliefs actions interactions

she needs to add a conclusion summing up the entire essay along with an ending sentence to complete it all nicely.