Write a shot story which ends with i just came in time to save the situation

One day I was heading home, when I saw my little brother being shoved into a car by two men before they could drive off I luckily got a quick shot of their licences plate. With fear I ran to a local police office, a police officer quickly traced the car and we found out that they were heading to an abandoned house, just in the nick of time the police officer broke down the door. accompanied by other police officers we were able to save my brother as well as my parents, if we were just a bit late I would have been worried about what could have happened to them, Im glad I just came in time to save the situation.

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in this passage from chapter 6 of "animal farm", by george orwell, what the author is ridiculing in this passage is the frivolity of some rules.

clover, the mare, believes she remembers that the fourth commandment forbade sleeping in beds because it was something that humans did. snowball, napoleon, and the pigs are brain-workers who look after the welfare of the farm. they are the obvious leaders because they are smart, and so they are entitled to eat the best food and sleep in beds. it is squealer, who says these lines making the difference between sleeping with sheets, what humans do, and sleeping in beds, what pigs do. the unwillingness to question authority makes the oppressed to obey without thinking.

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