Review your diary entry and revise one section to add more dialogue, description, or sensory language. Type your revision below.

I would include dialogue between the forest ranger and Adelle's father: He asked the ranger, "Have you seen any bears?" The ranger laughed, gave me a reassuring smile as though he knew why we were asking, and replied, "No one's seen a bear in this area in over five years!" I wonder if he could see the terror in my eyes.

Explanation:

summary - a brief statement or account of the main points of something.

main idea - the main idea is defined as the main point of a speech or piece of writing.

paragraph - a distinct section of a piece of writing, usually dealing with a single theme and indicated by a new line, indentation, or numbering.

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.