III. Rewrite the following sentences after correcting the mistakes in abbreviations, capitalization, and numbers:

1. Richard Jones is a MD specializing in neurological
disorders.
2. My cat Oscar weighs ten lbs, which is about 4.5-kgs.
3. the greeks were already in greece during the bronze age.
4. Like Cricket, Baseball is played in the Summer.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

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it translates into:

read the letter of your pen pal. write and answer 3 questions.