Make this sentence more interesting: The man walked through the forest.

The tall old man strode through the dimly lit forest.

Explanation:

A pale thin man dragged his legs throughout the immense sea of dark oaks.

P.D. Hope this helps!

sorry, you didn't give me the proper question

explanation:

each morning i wrote my name

on the dusty cabinet, then crossed

the dining table in script, scrawled

in capitals on the backs of chairs,

practicing signatures like scales

while mother followed squirting

linseed from a burping can