In the story "This Is What It Means To Say Phoenix, Arizona" by Sherman Alexie
Why do people avoid thomas?
In at least one well-developed paragragh of 7-8 (completely complete) sentences), provide an insightful answer to the question above, and be sure to include at least one quote from “This Is What It Means To Say Phoenix, Arizona.”

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

yea and yea x.x i love them =^-^=

to gain popularity at school, fitzgerald wrote plays for the school and cast himself as the star. he also joined one of the universitys most prestigious clubs.

hi,   i believe the outlines that were supposed to be showing at the sentences, are not. could you highlight them somehow?