1. What's the first step for revising a paragraph with run-on sentences?

Try to rearrange the sentences so that they make more sense.

Place periods at the end of each complete thought.

Figure out how many complete thoughts are in the paragraph.

Count the number of sentences and multiple by two.

after the signature of the treaty of versailles in june 1919, germany lost nearly 25,000 square miles and a population of 7 million people. these territories included eupen-malmedy area and moresnet which were ceded to belgium. regarding relations with france, germany ceded the sovereignty of the saar coal mines to this country, as well as the provinces of alsace-lorraine.

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always metal! releases anger and stress! bands i suggest are trivium, lamb of god, slayer, and amon amarth

i think she wanted to protect her children from the extreme racism of the american south.