Write an essay explaining the importance of strengthening bonds between
people

To have a stronger relationship.

Explanation:

It's important so that way you can always have somebody to talk to. It's like making friends. You share what you want to share with them and eventually you earn each others trust to where you can tell them everything. If there is no problems in the relationship then it will continue for years if you would like.  It's good to make friends so that way when you can't get things off your chest to your parents you have somebody you trust beside you and you can vent out to each other. Friends and Best Friends are different. With friends you might only tell them half of your day but won't completely vent out to them. For best friends you trust them with alot of things probably because of things that happened in the past or so. It's important to strengthen bonds with people so that way you can have somebody to talk to or that likes the same things you like and it won't be weird because you guys have things in common. Strengthening bonds happens through trust. As long as you guys trust each other with things you will get comfortable to tell each other everything.

i would say that it is a bad thesis because it doesn't explain what the health risks are. it seems to be a very vague thesis statement. thesis statements need to set up for the entire essay. it needs to give the reasons why people need to stop drinking diet soda.   so, i would say that it is a bad thesis.

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